My First Piece of Fan Mail

"Your blog is to fucking boring dud, go fuck your self"

Thanks for writing! But I must point out a few faux pas in your correspondence. Your comment should read as follows:

"Your blog is too fucking boring, dude. Go fuck yourself."

Here's what I did:

1. Changed "to" the preposition to "too" the adverb.


2. Corrected the typo, I assume, "dud" to "dude."


3. Changed the comma to a period. You have two complete sentences joined by a comma, which is technically a run-on sentence. I suggest using a period, a semicolon, or the conjunction "so."


4. Corrected the typo, "your self," to "yourself."